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by Reminiscent
Tue May 22, 2012 10:54 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: Topical. Anyone up?
Replies: 2
Views: 441

Re: Topical. Anyone up?

He can't stop looking at you.
by Reminiscent
Tue May 22, 2012 12:55 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: Topical. Anyone up?
Replies: 2
Views: 441

Topical. Anyone up?

Anyone up for a Topical vs me?
by Reminiscent
Tue May 22, 2012 12:49 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Resent - First Verse
Replies: 2
Views: 414

Resent - First Verse

Not 100% sure if I'm Collabing on this with Synapse or if I'm making a second verse. Either way, this is the first verse and would love some feed on it. [center]Alright, send us to the therapist, Show him we're both crazy as we dress up in our selfishness, Relish in your colors, dig up our fist arra...
by Reminiscent
Mon May 21, 2012 11:34 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Feeling fine
Replies: 6
Views: 781

Re: Feeling fine

[center]I always said my mind in this cypher from the start A writer with his Art.. Trying to give what he loves a shot but they got a sniper to my heart... (These four lines tripped me up at first. Although, after reading it a few times - I get the rhythm. Good start As a cool breeze will take my ...
by Reminiscent
Wed May 16, 2012 2:40 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
Replies: 11
Views: 906

Re: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd

[center] MonuMental Many view me as a Narcissist, the truth shouldn't be too far from this, In a booth spit fire, I'm an arsonist, my movements prove that I'm hard to hit, (I'm not exactly a fan of boasting, so please forgive me if I give bad criticism as I don't write in this style. I do like the M...
by Reminiscent
Wed May 16, 2012 4:01 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Reminisce
Replies: 2
Views: 381

Re: Reminisce

Yeah I fed 3 pieces so far. 2 of them not entirely in-depth but the last one I disected every line. With the Multi's, I've learned what I like and don't like about Multi's. When I was training myself on writing Multi's, almost full lines and every line would rhyme. I didn't really like the sound of ...
by Reminiscent
Wed May 16, 2012 3:04 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Because
Replies: 8
Views: 819

Re: Because

Iv'e grown cold it's known life blocks my spirit,I have a soul of stone (these 2 lines start me off right. Although, if you could enlighten me on what "life blocks my spirit" it would be great. I think I'm thinking of it too broadly though) Numbness holds my bones... (One of those sick lines that yo...
by Reminiscent
Tue May 15, 2012 10:03 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Reminisce
Replies: 2
Views: 381

Reminisce

This is my last piece written. Ever since I've had writers block and trying to battle through it. Been 3 weeks now. I've come here for help on Writers block and to grow as an artist, person, and writer. Thank you for reading. Confessions of a silent clown, drip down the sidewalk, The white chalk dre...
by Reminiscent
Tue May 15, 2012 10:02 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Trust Issues
Replies: 3
Views: 443

Re: Trust Issues

I like this, it's real and emotional. I don't exactly like the "uh" and "yeah" throughout the whole thing. It'd sound a lot better listened than read. I say for written pieces, you should exclude those and have those when you record. Other than that this piece is real talk. Good stuff
by Reminiscent
Tue May 15, 2012 10:00 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Addictions.
Replies: 10
Views: 679

Re: Addictions.

This is great. It conveys great emotion and what I like to call "subtle aggression" in some areas. I'd love to hear this recorded as I would understand a few more things about this.

I'm an absolute full fan of Multi's and you did them perfectly - great job. Great read.
by Reminiscent
Tue May 15, 2012 8:27 am
Forum: New Users
Topic: Reminiscent ready to take the next step.
Replies: 4
Views: 1771

Reminiscent ready to take the next step.

My name is Reminiscent and my real name is Robert. I go by Ayso, and Convalesce (old stage names I thought were good for me, then I found something that actually fits me). I've always been a writer, I wont go into my huge story. But I've been writing for about a year - now. I write poetically and on...

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