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- Fri May 11, 2012 10:46 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: new here appreciate feedback
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3504
Re: new here appreciate feedback
I feel it I feel it.. I think that you should find a beat to spit your bars to. It'll help ease out your flow. Even though it might not be that noticeable, rapping without a beat does go somewhat off-tempo and having a rhythm in the background can be a major help. Try to stay consistent and link you...
- Fri May 11, 2012 10:26 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: My Introduction
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2152
Re: My Introduction
Not bad for a start man, you gotta work on consistency in yours bars though. Find a topic and stick to it. There's plenty you've got to learn, but for now just try workin on perfecting your flow and staying consistent, because those are important elements.. keep doin your thing
- Fri May 11, 2012 9:55 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Puzzling
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4561
Re: Puzzling
Dope bars man.. I'm feelin it, you connected all of your bars nicely and never astrayed from the topic for the most part and the multis were decent. A lot of the imagery I'm taking in from this is abstract. It's fine to have abstractness in art. In my opinion you could go deeper into the meaning of ...
- Fri May 11, 2012 9:46 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Sever And Kill
- Replies: 14
- Views: 54522
Re: Sever And Kill
Dope verse, I see the sort-of abstract multi-packed pattern in this post and it works well to convey your message.. there was a lot of gruesome lines that made me both go like "oh wow" and some of them that had me laughin rofl "No notion to gloat, in bloody oceans you'll be hoping to ...
- Fri May 11, 2012 9:36 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Second Icarus
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2177
Re: Second Icarus
Gotcha man. Was lookin' for the rules in the section and didn't see em, but I'm not surprised about this.. will feed some posts shortly
- Fri May 11, 2012 9:14 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Second Icarus
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2177
Second Icarus
Feedlinks: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/sever-and-kill-vt25816.html#p191983 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/puzzling-vt25762.html#p191984 INSTRUMENTAL: http://soundcloud.com/jules-watts/tenderly -- I live a life of major ambitions, and over-zealous schemes Visions of taking ascendance once I ...
- Fri May 11, 2012 9:11 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Moonlight
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1966
Moonlight
feedlinks: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/my-introduction-vt25835.html#p191988 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/new-here-appreciate-feedback-vt25786.html#p191993 INSTRUMENTAL: http://soundcloud.com/jules-watts/emotion [Intro] Night.. The Solace of Sol.. *Laughs* So vast and unexplored.. To me, i...
Re: Ayyyyyyye
Yup
Re: Ayyyyyyye
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Ayyyyyyye
I'm the best lol all bullshit aside I go by Sini and I'm new here, wssup yall