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by 4DUB
Sat Jan 14, 2012 5:20 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Smalls Uno vs. 4DUB(Dub wins 5-3)
Replies: 19
Views: 1222

Re: Smalls Uno vs. 4DUB

Im Not gonna Lie... Both sucked... Horribly... Most of it seemed fillerish. No Hard punches... but smalls Came with more consistancy... Didnt veer off too much... harder punches... Pretty Much thats it... pretty gay battle i must say... STEP YO GAME Up.. VVVV=== Smalls And this is coming from someb...
by 4DUB
Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:43 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Smalls Uno vs. 4DUB(Dub wins 5-3)
Replies: 19
Views: 1222

Re: Smalls Uno vs. 4DUB

goodlook? u over ur head like ur sig shows u think u sick but u shouldn't take this 'Big Dose' (Smalls Uno/Big Dos) u a hater right? cause ur hoes don't bounce bet u feel like a slave cause ur votes don't count (blake downs vs shooter) don't take it personal tho, im jus killin u i bet i touched feel...
by 4DUB
Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:49 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: 4DUB vs leeroi green
Replies: 1
Views: 394

4DUB vs leeroi green

5 bars. due 24 hrs after check in -- Thu Jan 12, 2012 12:07 pm -- wow, really? 12 wins and 12 losses? ur better off left on the floor like a shell cartridge and to think u didnt wanna battle me cause i wasn't nice u frontin right? Break urself n scatter like a dozen mice u want a piece of me? well t...
by 4DUB
Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:40 pm
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz
Replies: 30
Views: 2369

Re: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz

8) mary jane, man i love the way u do me when im gloomy u move me n keep me feelin groovy no worries, lifes blurry till we hit the girlie (white girl) that furry go straight to the 'Temple' like it was 'Shirley' But i worry n start hurting when im down to shake but i shoulda seen it comin since the ...
by 4DUB
Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:04 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: 4DUB vs Blake Downs (Blake wins NOSHOW)
Replies: 3
Views: 499

4DUB vs Blake Downs (Blake wins NOSHOW)

5 bars due in 48 hrs.
by 4DUB
Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:07 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: 4DUB vs Blake Downs you happy?
Replies: 3
Views: 426

Re: 4DUB vs Blake Downs you happy?

lol aight 5 bars due 48 hrs. 3-4 bars aint enough
by 4DUB
Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:34 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: 4DUB vs Blake Downs you happy?
Replies: 3
Views: 426

4DUB vs Blake Downs you happy?

5 bars
by 4DUB
Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:07 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Just sayin
Replies: 8
Views: 520

Re: Just sayin

See this is completely opposite lol u got mad skill i like the rhymes and the flow. The only thing i would say is u jumped around a little bit but not too much so where the reader loses the point. Good shit man 10/10 lol
by 4DUB
Tue Jan 10, 2012 8:54 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Broken Water (life Stories Vol. 3)
Replies: 7
Views: 464

Re: Broken Water (life Stories Vol. 3)

Nice. This is art right here. But like Al said there's a lot of "she". Try cuttin it down like "she dreams of trouble.." to "Dreaming of trouble.." Other than that nice rhymes and good flow.

:clap:
by 4DUB
Tue Jan 10, 2012 7:56 am
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: The Revival of IL
Replies: 1
Views: 446

The Revival of IL

4 bars startin with the last rhyme from the person before.. The new guys gonna make it big, well at least im tryin to i came from another site but it seems like this ones dying too! "The Holidays" is the theory "Oh i went to see my aunties" When in reality they took time off to clean their panties M...
by 4DUB
Tue Jan 10, 2012 6:17 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Collectively Ill -vs- Team Haz (Team Haz Wins)
Replies: 8
Views: 1094

Re: Collectively Ill -vs- Team Haz (READY 4 VOTES)

dope ass battle. i didnt know how to rate either so i did a 1-10 per member Quix: I liked the flow and rhymes but his 4th bar coulda been better 7/10 IlloKWent: great wordplay and multies but slowed down at the end 8/10 Kau: personally i dont like his ABBA rhyming format but it seems to work. good w...
by 4DUB
Tue Jan 10, 2012 5:42 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: 4DUB vs Blake Downs
Replies: 1
Views: 306

4DUB vs Blake Downs

5 bars
by 4DUB
Tue Jan 10, 2012 2:02 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: ILLoKwent Vs GhostWrida (closed)
Replies: 10
Views: 818

Re: I.L. Presents: ILLoKwent Vs GhostWrida

hence the name "GhostWrida"
by 4DUB
Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:51 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Bones vs Blake Downs (Blake wins KO)
Replies: 6
Views: 672

Re: Bones vs Blake Downs

Pretty average battle imo. Benny could use some work on his rhymes and his flow. Blake had a better flow but again rhymes coulda been better. Blake gets my vote
by 4DUB
Sat Jan 07, 2012 7:45 am
Forum: New Users
Topic: NEW
Replies: 8
Views: 2269

NEW

wht up ppl. im 4DUB aka 420.

im here mainly because i like writin lyrics. i came from a different site that died so jus tryin to see how this site is

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