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by optic
Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:47 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Collectively ILL Collab / Text & Audio
Replies: 11
Views: 805

Re: Collectively ILL Collab / Text & Audio

that beat is nice and the flows where on point i like the hateful/dark sound to it.. raw shit.. yall are def. doing your thing
by optic
Tue Nov 22, 2011 3:14 am
Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
Replies: 160
Views: 7828

Re: WORD ASSOCIATION!

piss
by optic
Tue Nov 22, 2011 3:01 am
Forum: Hip Hop Discussion
Topic: What Track Are You Bumping?
Replies: 1535
Views: 49815

Re: What Track Are You Bumping?

vinnie paz- razorblade salvation... what yall know about that vinnie paz
by optic
Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:56 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Vengeance Applied Vol 1... A heated Rage
Replies: 5
Views: 370

Re: Vengeance Applied Vol 1... A heated Rage

that was ill man i like it flowed nice and i liked the rhyme scheme. not really anything to fix up from what i see
by optic
Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:50 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: One last night
Replies: 3
Views: 309

One last night

one of those days so heres a freewrite its a little messy cause i just wrote and never went back just let it all go another night grippin the knife wishing tonight could be the night i finnally end my life// bites of kryptonite the mirror is only hatrid in my sights//so i grab the knife i dim the li...
by optic
Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:28 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Feelin It
Replies: 10
Views: 665

Re: Feelin It

the flow is to the beat besides a couple forced rhymes in the second verse but i was still feeling it very good drop.
by optic
Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:24 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: This Feelin
Replies: 27
Views: 2109

Re: This Feelin

the flow was great man and the story def was told not that i needed to know about your mornings ha. but def rating that 10/10 man didnt hear anything that wasnt on point or off flow.
by optic
Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:21 pm
Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
Replies: 160
Views: 7828

Re: WORD ASSOCIATION!

river
by optic
Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:02 pm
Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
Replies: 160
Views: 7828

Re: WORD ASSOCIATION!

punches
by optic
Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:00 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Bite Back
Replies: 7
Views: 872

Re: Bite Back

thanks for the feed back, and yeah i know what your saying im still getting the hang of this site so ill slowly become more active.

-- Sat Nov 19, 2011 12:00 am --

thanks for the feed back, and yeah i know what your saying im still getting the hang of this site so ill slowly become more active.
by optic
Sat Nov 19, 2011 2:36 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Bite Back
Replies: 7
Views: 872

Bite Back

trying to get some of my things out there so heres a fresh freewrite for you tell me what you think. sorry about the spelling it isnt my strong point. envy fuels the nonsence thru false contexts// shits preplex and we make it more complex// screaming and throwing objects// mind is fulla shit but not...
by optic
Sat Nov 19, 2011 6:46 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: No tears
Replies: 4
Views: 632

Re: No tears

thanks for the feedback and the welcome
by optic
Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:44 pm
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: 1 bar cypher
Replies: 202
Views: 11947

Re: 1 bar cypher

stay-forever-clever decypher and sever-letters//
pray-for better-weather and never say never//
by optic
Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:31 pm
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz
Replies: 30
Views: 2745

Re: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz

my mind stays sky high,
half blind cant see out my damn eyes,
got me chinky lookin slanted vison why lie,
get the blunt again and im still hittin i feel fine,
4 blunts and a big bowl pack now im feelin nice,
laughin at the sound of reality gigglin at life,
by optic
Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:18 pm
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: No tears
Replies: 4
Views: 632

No tears

i felt the pain but invisoned happiness still felt the same so i went to the cabinets popped the top of the bottle to stop the madness swallowed every last one and collapsed to the matress i had troubles and struggles i felt the sadness now im grinnin and chilling as i slip to the blackness

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