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by Caligari
Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:54 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Of Mice & Men
Replies: 2
Views: 3654

Of Mice & Men

I’ll be beheading your leaders Ready for any floor speakers Theoretically your chance of ending me, meager So either try to cope Or vote for someone who can give you hope Even if the pope gropes dis Kid, it means he’ll die from stroke from what I wrote with my pen that's now spoken Watch his eyes cl...
by Caligari
Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:39 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: I call out string cheese
Replies: 0
Views: 737

I call out string cheese

you can set up the rules, i just want no flipping. due 9/7/2011 by the stroke of midnite
by Caligari
Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:58 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: SHEET OF ARMOR (The Maneater Edition) FEAT. MONUmental
Replies: 7
Views: 1631

Re: SHEET OF ARMOR (The Maneater Edition) FEAT. MONUmental

The CIA needs to scope this, cause this actual intelligence. Leaves a kid's face deep in the chest of mama, death's upon ya, Pain which makes ya caress ya daughters like the best of fathers, Sorrow hits below the belt, it's felt like hell's depths have bombed ya That was sexy. Can i quote Monu's ent...
by Caligari
Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:07 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Perpetual Greatness
Replies: 4
Views: 1246

Perpetual Greatness

<t>I’ve been in the darkest of places, from the stone to chrome ages<br/> Where I roam, I’ve been shown to be known as the dangerous<br/> My work’s locked up in cages, in the pages of mages’ <br/> Sought after and read by the dead and courageous <br/> The nameless and faceless who all seek to be fam...
by Caligari
Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:48 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Blake Downs -vs- Static (Blake wins KO)
Replies: 7
Views: 3042

Re: Blake Downs -vs- Static

Punches: Blake Flow: Blake Personals: Draw Enjoyment: Blake Vote: Blake I agree with 3rd string in that Static's verse seemed too basic and not tailored to his opponent. Blake I thought had a bit more clever lines, his ending was better and I particularly enjoyed this line, "these are sharks ey...
by Caligari
Mon Sep 05, 2011 3:49 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Insane Verse
Replies: 10
Views: 2276

Re: Insane Verse

Epic flow buddy. You must have some really intelligent fans with your level of vocabulary, otherwise most of this will fly over their heads. (me included)<lies. What impressed me most as that it got deeper and stronger as it went on. My favorite bars: "Mark the beasts with marks that mark your ...
by Caligari
Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:46 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Get your shit in Order (Fear the Reaper)
Replies: 4
Views: 1259

Re: Get your shit in Order (Fear the Reaper)

Yo, loved the flow it was tight. Your subject line was ill too, it was a good read, particularly loved your ending, thought it hit home. Liked your play on death, and how your going to send me there. It be an honor to die at your hands. <lol
by Caligari
Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:21 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Tammy
Replies: 3
Views: 1148

Re: Tammy

It's fairly decent, i just noticed that you ended 3 of your lines with 'you'. Perhaps mix up the rhyme scheme. Not much to gain from this honestly. She'd love it though.
by Caligari
Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:06 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: SEVEN DEADLY SINS!! 7 MAN COLLABORATION!!
Replies: 16
Views: 4169

Re: SEVEN DEADLY SINS!! 7 MAN COLLABORATION!!

I think defiance went the hardest on this. Normally i'd give in depth feed, but this was pretty tight all around. Arvincible was my 2nd favorite, not far behind defiance, and the rest of ya'll were pretty tight, each one had some memorable lines that stuck out. I look forward to reading you guys ind...
by Caligari
Sat Sep 03, 2011 11:37 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: My Entrance
Replies: 2
Views: 1151

My Entrance

I don’t rap for entertainment, for the fame or the payments The art is my calling, just like drawing chalk on the pavement It’s enslavement to never get to be recognized for one’s work With my luck I’ll be dead before my rise ever reaches its birth It ain’t worth trying to persuade you to wade throu...

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