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- Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:54 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Of Mice & Men
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3654
Of Mice & Men
I’ll be beheading your leaders Ready for any floor speakers Theoretically your chance of ending me, meager So either try to cope Or vote for someone who can give you hope Even if the pope gropes dis Kid, it means he’ll die from stroke from what I wrote with my pen that's now spoken Watch his eyes cl...
- Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:39 am
- Forum: Callout Section
- Topic: I call out string cheese
- Replies: 0
- Views: 737
I call out string cheese
you can set up the rules, i just want no flipping. due 9/7/2011 by the stroke of midnite
- Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:58 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: SHEET OF ARMOR (The Maneater Edition) FEAT. MONUmental
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1631
Re: SHEET OF ARMOR (The Maneater Edition) FEAT. MONUmental
The CIA needs to scope this, cause this actual intelligence. Leaves a kid's face deep in the chest of mama, death's upon ya, Pain which makes ya caress ya daughters like the best of fathers, Sorrow hits below the belt, it's felt like hell's depths have bombed ya That was sexy. Can i quote Monu's ent...
- Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:07 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Perpetual Greatness
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1246
Perpetual Greatness
<t>I’ve been in the darkest of places, from the stone to chrome ages<br/> Where I roam, I’ve been shown to be known as the dangerous<br/> My work’s locked up in cages, in the pages of mages’ <br/> Sought after and read by the dead and courageous <br/> The nameless and faceless who all seek to be fam...
- Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:48 am
- Forum: Closed Text Battles
- Topic: Blake Downs -vs- Static (Blake wins KO)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3042
Re: Blake Downs -vs- Static
Punches: Blake Flow: Blake Personals: Draw Enjoyment: Blake Vote: Blake I agree with 3rd string in that Static's verse seemed too basic and not tailored to his opponent. Blake I thought had a bit more clever lines, his ending was better and I particularly enjoyed this line, "these are sharks ey...
- Mon Sep 05, 2011 3:49 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Insane Verse
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2276
Re: Insane Verse
Epic flow buddy. You must have some really intelligent fans with your level of vocabulary, otherwise most of this will fly over their heads. (me included)<lies. What impressed me most as that it got deeper and stronger as it went on. My favorite bars: "Mark the beasts with marks that mark your ...
- Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:46 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Get your shit in Order (Fear the Reaper)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1259
Re: Get your shit in Order (Fear the Reaper)
Yo, loved the flow it was tight. Your subject line was ill too, it was a good read, particularly loved your ending, thought it hit home. Liked your play on death, and how your going to send me there. It be an honor to die at your hands. <lol
- Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:21 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Tammy
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1148
Re: Tammy
It's fairly decent, i just noticed that you ended 3 of your lines with 'you'. Perhaps mix up the rhyme scheme. Not much to gain from this honestly. She'd love it though.
- Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:06 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: SEVEN DEADLY SINS!! 7 MAN COLLABORATION!!
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4169
Re: SEVEN DEADLY SINS!! 7 MAN COLLABORATION!!
I think defiance went the hardest on this. Normally i'd give in depth feed, but this was pretty tight all around. Arvincible was my 2nd favorite, not far behind defiance, and the rest of ya'll were pretty tight, each one had some memorable lines that stuck out. I look forward to reading you guys ind...
- Sat Sep 03, 2011 11:37 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: My Entrance
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1151
My Entrance
I don’t rap for entertainment, for the fame or the payments The art is my calling, just like drawing chalk on the pavement It’s enslavement to never get to be recognized for one’s work With my luck I’ll be dead before my rise ever reaches its birth It ain’t worth trying to persuade you to wade throu...