Search found 16 matches
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:58 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: What's on? freestyle
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1043
What's on? freestyle
startin soft, i think not words are dropped like a contract durin a scandal what you think shows in the lines creasin your face readin me's hard to handle going mentalist, i'm no Simon Baker but i know the truth when i see it the smallest details are your downfall, now call mom like this is meant to...
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:53 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The mind of a incestual predator
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1618
Re: The mind of a incestual predator
definitely on a horrorcore vibe here.
shit's twisted, which is what I like every now and then.
killer flow, creative, even if some concepts were ones i've heard and seen before.
shit's twisted, which is what I like every now and then.
killer flow, creative, even if some concepts were ones i've heard and seen before.
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:49 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Bitter Hatred
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2999
Re: Bitter Hatred
this seemed more like a hip hop poetry piece. which is what i dig. well thought out.
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:28 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Darkness
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1461
Darkness
(Paraphrased from Micah 7: 8-10) Never again will you gloat over me Like some worthless trophy I've fallen to your fists and sneering jabs for shallow glory Watch out, for i will rise and change the story The darkness may rule about me The darkness will be no more with the Lord as my light I have si...
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:28 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: I am who I am
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1224
Re: I am who I am
i'm a quick reader and as i read there were some surprises but, this seemed blase. decent to say the least.
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:27 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: No Breaking Light
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1490
Re: No Breaking Light
i liked this, it's classic style, but i dug what you were conveying. good job.
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:21 am
- Forum: Closed Text Battles
- Topic: 32neilz *vs* Kause Mc (K.MC wins 5-4)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4175
Re: 32neilz *vs* Kause Mc
wow this has been up a while...
Punches-Kause
Flow-32
Mulities-32
Personals-tie
Enjoyment-32
Rhymescheme- tie
vote: 32
punches are what make a battle, but you can come with daggers and still not break the skin. that's why 32 got my vote.
Punches-Kause
Flow-32
Mulities-32
Personals-tie
Enjoyment-32
Rhymescheme- tie
vote: 32
punches are what make a battle, but you can come with daggers and still not break the skin. that's why 32 got my vote.
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:12 am
- Forum: Closed Text Battles
- Topic: Buer Vs. SplashKing (Buer wins KO)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2288
Re: Buer Vs. SplashKing
imo, Wiz's vote shouldn't count because it's not thoroughly explained. Punchlines: Buer Nameplay: Tie Flow: Tie.. Rhymescheme: Buer Personals: Tie vote: Buer expo: Buer,took this in my opinion. loved his complexity and scheme. King, shorten the lines and try not to get too fancy i could tell which p...
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:41 am
- Forum: The Lounge
- Topic: Name Game
- Replies: 238
- Views: 50207
Re: Name Game
Obie Trice
- Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:39 am
- Forum: New Users
- Topic: Whats up Vohkab
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1431
Re: Whats up Vohkab
lol, thanks.
- Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:08 am
- Forum: The Lounge
- Topic: Name Game
- Replies: 238
- Views: 50207
- Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:58 am
- Forum: The Lounge
- Topic: Name Game
- Replies: 238
- Views: 50207
Re: Name Game
Braille
- Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:55 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: 3 Word Cypher~.~.~.~
- Replies: 302
- Views: 90543
Re: 3 Word Cypher~.~.~.~
Riches slow comfort
- Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:50 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: More of a story than a poem
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1283
Re: More of a story than a poem
could use spellcheck, but then that's me.
umm, this was interesting to say the least.
some of the language and grammar made some parts seem redundant. but this decent overall.
umm, this was interesting to say the least.
some of the language and grammar made some parts seem redundant. but this decent overall.
- Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:43 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: free... drop whatever you want, no guidelines
- Replies: 40
- Views: 18507
Re: free... drop whatever you want, no guidelines
:clears throat: droppin in i'm calmin 'em with gas knockin 'em out with verbs and class old school I know, but when it comes i rip simple as God did them kingdoms a DMX/tech N9ne hybrib dealin with demons workin on devotions has me doing readin's cause the sea man has me quakin 'n the deck squeakin ...