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by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:58 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: What's on? freestyle
Replies: 3
Views: 395

What's on? freestyle

startin soft, i think not words are dropped like a contract durin a scandal what you think shows in the lines creasin your face readin me's hard to handle going mentalist, i'm no Simon Baker but i know the truth when i see it the smallest details are your downfall, now call mom like this is meant to...
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:53 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The mind of a incestual predator
Replies: 6
Views: 669

Re: The mind of a incestual predator

definitely on a horrorcore vibe here.
shit's twisted, which is what I like every now and then.
killer flow, creative, even if some concepts were ones i've heard and seen before.

8)
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:49 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Bitter Hatred
Replies: 16
Views: 1185

Re: Bitter Hatred

this seemed more like a hip hop poetry piece. which is what i dig. well thought out.

8)
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:28 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Darkness
Replies: 2
Views: 712

Darkness

(Paraphrased from Micah 7: 8-10) Never again will you gloat over me Like some worthless trophy I've fallen to your fists and sneering jabs for shallow glory Watch out, for i will rise and change the story The darkness may rule about me The darkness will be no more with the Lord as my light I have si...
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:28 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: I am who I am
Replies: 1
Views: 580

Re: I am who I am

i'm a quick reader and as i read there were some surprises but, this seemed blase. decent to say the least.
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:27 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: No Breaking Light
Replies: 2
Views: 755

Re: No Breaking Light

i liked this, it's classic style, but i dug what you were conveying. good job.
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:21 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: 32neilz *vs* Kause Mc (K.MC wins 5-4)
Replies: 14
Views: 1620

Re: 32neilz *vs* Kause Mc

wow this has been up a while...

Punches-Kause
Flow-32
Mulities-32
Personals-tie
Enjoyment-32
Rhymescheme- tie

vote: 32

punches are what make a battle, but you can come with daggers and still not break the skin. that's why 32 got my vote.
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:12 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Buer Vs. SplashKing (Buer wins KO)
Replies: 7
Views: 859

Re: Buer Vs. SplashKing

imo, Wiz's vote shouldn't count because it's not thoroughly explained. Punchlines: Buer Nameplay: Tie Flow: Tie.. Rhymescheme: Buer Personals: Tie vote: Buer expo: Buer,took this in my opinion. loved his complexity and scheme. King, shorten the lines and try not to get too fancy i could tell which p...
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:41 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Name Game
Replies: 238
Views: 15984

Re: Name Game

Obie Trice
by Vohkab
Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:39 am
Forum: New Users
Topic: Whats up Vohkab
Replies: 4
Views: 490

Re: Whats up Vohkab

lol, thanks.
by Vohkab
Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:08 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Name Game
Replies: 238
Views: 15984

Re: Name Game

AZ
by Vohkab
Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:58 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Name Game
Replies: 238
Views: 15984

Re: Name Game

Braille
by Vohkab
Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:55 am
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: 3 Word Cypher~.~.~.~
Replies: 302
Views: 20968

Re: 3 Word Cypher~.~.~.~

Riches slow comfort
by Vohkab
Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:50 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: More of a story than a poem
Replies: 1
Views: 580

Re: More of a story than a poem

could use spellcheck, but then that's me.
umm, this was interesting to say the least.
some of the language and grammar made some parts seem redundant. but this decent overall.
by Vohkab
Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:43 am
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: free... drop whatever you want, no guidelines
Replies: 40
Views: 6185

Re: free... drop whatever you want, no guidelines

:clears throat: droppin in i'm calmin 'em with gas knockin 'em out with verbs and class old school I know, but when it comes i rip simple as God did them kingdoms a DMX/tech N9ne hybrib dealin with demons workin on devotions has me doing readin's cause the sea man has me quakin 'n the deck squeakin ...

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