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by Shawnmd
Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:44 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Consistency
Replies: 3
Views: 1862

Consistency

ShawnMD will keep you at the margin, on a liquid diet, just so I can prolong your starving, eliminate the liquids, know I'm only just starting, freeze limbs like warts so I can break them as they harden, shocking clans with numbers tremendous, stupendous, I'm the root of the problem, lowering every ...
by Shawnmd
Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:41 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Nightmare after Christmas
Replies: 12
Views: 4516

Re: The Nightmare after Christmas

Wow, you guys added quite the twist on this christmas post. All the verses were vivid, and I didnt even expect the santa you introduced lol. Fun post to read.
by Shawnmd
Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:28 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: ugly on the inside
Replies: 11
Views: 6899

Re: ugly on the inside

Like everyone else said, your rhymes were on point, and all of your lyrics flowed from one to the next extremely well. In other words you stayed on topic. All in all, you took a common topic to the next level so good job.
by Shawnmd
Fri Nov 11, 2011 7:06 am
Forum: Crews
Topic: ArchiText Penmanship
Replies: 22
Views: 11339

Re: ArchiText Penmanship

check
by Shawnmd
Thu Oct 27, 2011 9:26 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Escaping From Hell
Replies: 7
Views: 2456

Re: Escaping From Hell

Those multies were too dope, consistent throughout. The best part of this post was its consistency and flow. Each line connected to the next.
by Shawnmd
Thu Oct 27, 2011 9:21 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Just A Question
Replies: 2
Views: 1219

Re: Just A Question

Great first post. A lot of lyrics stuck out compared to a lot of other posts i have read. Im not how well it flows when you say it, but good nonetheless.
by Shawnmd
Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:27 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Beast from the East
Replies: 4
Views: 2042

Re: Beast from the East

Thanks for the feedback, structure seems to be the main issue here. I'll work on that.
by Shawnmd
Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:25 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: CLASSIC WRITTEN PIECES
Replies: 18
Views: 4413

Re: CLASSIC WRITTEN PIECES

A series of unfortunate events by monumental.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/a-ser ... 23866.html
by Shawnmd
Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:12 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: !!!! TheOneYouHate Diss !!!! Straight Bodied !!!!
Replies: 40
Views: 12184

Re: !!!! TheOneYouHate Diss !!!! Straight Bodied !!!!

Jesus He's-A-Disgrace!! Dude U Look Like A Gay Crook-With-Lock-Jaw Plus Hes Hooked-On-Scotts-Drops "Dont Bite The Hand That Feeds You" But How Can He Not When His Fingers Look-Like-Hot-Dogs?! That was too ill. Like A Bladder Infection, Urine-Trouble!! Ur Earrings? Them Fake Karats-Ancient,...
by Shawnmd
Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:00 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Beast from the East
Replies: 4
Views: 2042

Beast from the East

Feedbacks appreciated, and what im looking for. Let me know what you guys think. your living in a illusion that relates to a haircut, thinking that you have a edge, since you fail to play fair but, I know I will need low virtue to hurt you, absorbing air in the room just to see you squirt blue, If y...
by Shawnmd
Sat Oct 22, 2011 12:59 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Prometheus
Replies: 2
Views: 1359

Re: Prometheus

I agree, because this was a great verse. An original post for sure and nice choice for a beat. Your flow on here was near perfect. Check out my 'Beast from the East' post in the written rhymes section.
by Shawnmd
Sat Oct 15, 2011 4:43 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: True Indeed
Replies: 4
Views: 1816

Re: True Indeed

You were spitting some raw stuff. Every line shifted to the next extrememly well.
by Shawnmd
Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:46 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Slaughter
Replies: 2
Views: 1333

Slaughter

check it, I dont look it, but im the one you want to kill faster, any fight will reveal that im tougher than a drill master, it shows through my progress that ive had to be diligent, i see you dont ever train, so why do you claim to be militant? I doubt your murderous, as for beef, your burgerless, ...
by Shawnmd
Sun Oct 02, 2011 8:28 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Insane
Replies: 7
Views: 2800

Re: Insane

Alright, ill try and do something different. Probably display my storytelling ablities.
by Shawnmd
Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:41 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: NEW MIXTAPE 'A BAG OF MIXED EMOTIONS' OUT NOW CHECK IT OUT!!
Replies: 2
Views: 1683

Re: NEW MIXTAPE 'A BAG OF MIXED EMOTIONS' OUT NOW CHECK IT O

Here are my links. http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/persistence-vt23964.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/insane-vt21410.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/time-not-much-left-vt23956.html As for your mixtape: heres a track by track review: 1. Brainwashed- Beat was not the kind im into, tho...

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