Search found 88 matches
- Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:44 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Consistency
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1862
Consistency
ShawnMD will keep you at the margin, on a liquid diet, just so I can prolong your starving, eliminate the liquids, know I'm only just starting, freeze limbs like warts so I can break them as they harden, shocking clans with numbers tremendous, stupendous, I'm the root of the problem, lowering every ...
- Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:41 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Nightmare after Christmas
- Replies: 12
- Views: 4516
Re: The Nightmare after Christmas
Wow, you guys added quite the twist on this christmas post. All the verses were vivid, and I didnt even expect the santa you introduced lol. Fun post to read.
- Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:28 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: ugly on the inside
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6899
Re: ugly on the inside
Like everyone else said, your rhymes were on point, and all of your lyrics flowed from one to the next extremely well. In other words you stayed on topic. All in all, you took a common topic to the next level so good job.
- Fri Nov 11, 2011 7:06 am
- Forum: Crews
- Topic: ArchiText Penmanship
- Replies: 22
- Views: 11339
Re: ArchiText Penmanship
check
- Thu Oct 27, 2011 9:26 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Escaping From Hell
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2456
Re: Escaping From Hell
Those multies were too dope, consistent throughout. The best part of this post was its consistency and flow. Each line connected to the next.
- Thu Oct 27, 2011 9:21 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Just A Question
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1219
Re: Just A Question
Great first post. A lot of lyrics stuck out compared to a lot of other posts i have read. Im not how well it flows when you say it, but good nonetheless.
- Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:27 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Beast from the East
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2042
Re: Beast from the East
Thanks for the feedback, structure seems to be the main issue here. I'll work on that.
- Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:25 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: CLASSIC WRITTEN PIECES
- Replies: 18
- Views: 4413
Re: CLASSIC WRITTEN PIECES
A series of unfortunate events by monumental.
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/a-ser ... 23866.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/a-ser ... 23866.html
- Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:12 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: !!!! TheOneYouHate Diss !!!! Straight Bodied !!!!
- Replies: 40
- Views: 12184
Re: !!!! TheOneYouHate Diss !!!! Straight Bodied !!!!
Jesus He's-A-Disgrace!! Dude U Look Like A Gay Crook-With-Lock-Jaw Plus Hes Hooked-On-Scotts-Drops "Dont Bite The Hand That Feeds You" But How Can He Not When His Fingers Look-Like-Hot-Dogs?! That was too ill. Like A Bladder Infection, Urine-Trouble!! Ur Earrings? Them Fake Karats-Ancient,...
- Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:00 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Beast from the East
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2042
Beast from the East
Feedbacks appreciated, and what im looking for. Let me know what you guys think. your living in a illusion that relates to a haircut, thinking that you have a edge, since you fail to play fair but, I know I will need low virtue to hurt you, absorbing air in the room just to see you squirt blue, If y...
- Sat Oct 22, 2011 12:59 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Prometheus
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1359
Re: Prometheus
I agree, because this was a great verse. An original post for sure and nice choice for a beat. Your flow on here was near perfect. Check out my 'Beast from the East' post in the written rhymes section.
- Sat Oct 15, 2011 4:43 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: True Indeed
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1816
Re: True Indeed
You were spitting some raw stuff. Every line shifted to the next extrememly well.
- Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:46 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Slaughter
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1333
Slaughter
check it, I dont look it, but im the one you want to kill faster, any fight will reveal that im tougher than a drill master, it shows through my progress that ive had to be diligent, i see you dont ever train, so why do you claim to be militant? I doubt your murderous, as for beef, your burgerless, ...
- Sun Oct 02, 2011 8:28 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Insane
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2800
Re: Insane
Alright, ill try and do something different. Probably display my storytelling ablities.
- Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:41 pm
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: NEW MIXTAPE 'A BAG OF MIXED EMOTIONS' OUT NOW CHECK IT OUT!!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1683
Re: NEW MIXTAPE 'A BAG OF MIXED EMOTIONS' OUT NOW CHECK IT O
Here are my links. http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/persistence-vt23964.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/insane-vt21410.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/time-not-much-left-vt23956.html As for your mixtape: heres a track by track review: 1. Brainwashed- Beat was not the kind im into, tho...