Search found 116 matches
- Wed Sep 28, 2011 1:31 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Trials
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1969
Re: Trials
nice piece, the rhyme scheme was damn near perfect. Your vocab was decent but it was more how you used the words that made the piece. I loved the opener "I meditate and let it marinate, personal terror state, Tear my face off preparing dates, daring to stare at fate, No scaring hate, the same w...
- Tue Sep 27, 2011 6:51 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: to the people
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1640
to the people
I'm gripping the mic, holding my balls hold up pause, hold the applause thanks for teaching me how to crawl how to appall & hold my finger to the law dropping your sharks at the name john paul and most of all, for never letting me fall the charismatic static, i'm steady wreaking havoc trying to ...
- Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:48 pm
- Forum: Closed Text Battles
- Topic: CBK V Tre Tru (Tre wins 3-0 KO)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2568
Re: CBK V Tre Tru
MVGT :Tre, his multies were there, very clear, the flow worked better and i felt he had more vicious hits.
- Sun Sep 18, 2011 1:19 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: whatcha know about it
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1346
whatcha know about it
I be going harder then a fossilized erection steady getting high, waving hi to the Jetsons thoughts off the top while others need rogaine blowing flames hotter then a dragon filled with propane i'm a fucking dro-bot, go go gadget dope game smoking on that kush but i never fucked with cocaine not yet...
- Fri Sep 09, 2011 2:35 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: 88SkyLink - multis, punches & wordplays
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1805
Re: 88SkyLink - multis, punches & wordplays
i really dug the multi's and wordplay, keep it up man
- Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:01 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: nightmares of the bottom remake
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2224
- Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:00 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: 88SkyLink - Bars for my survivors
- Replies: 23
- Views: 7137
Re: 88SkyLink - Bars for my survivors
deep shit man, great multi's through the entire peice keep it up man
- Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:11 pm
- Forum: Closed Text Battles
- Topic: MITTY VS PLAGUE ARSONIST (Mitty wins KO)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3312
Re: MITTY VS PLAGUE ARSONIST
by no means should you respect moneymaker's fake ass lol, but i would have to give it to mitty, it seemed he had better personal punches. you were throwing kind of broad ones out there, not that some weren't good. I liked the techs message line. but i was feeling mitty' flow, multis and rhymes a lit...
- Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:07 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Mastered the Flow
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1175
Re: Mastered the Flow
pure fire bro, loved it
- Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:38 am
- Forum: Closed Text Battles
- Topic: Blake Downs -vs- Static (Blake wins KO)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3046
Re: Blake Downs -vs- Static
check -- Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:32 am -- oh, hi, oh, this pussy thought that he could whoop me you took a gamble you gonna lose better call the bookie Call me big blue cause you nothing but fuckeye talk shit till ya tounge tied, cause i know you ain't a tough guy like luke i'll show up and destroy the d...
- Thu Sep 01, 2011 1:07 pm
- Forum: Callout Section
- Topic: open invite
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1774
open invite
5 bars/10 lines, anyone at all, you set it up
-- Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:00 am --
really, no one lol?
-- Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:00 am --
really, no one lol?
- Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:03 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Soldier 'an Sailor's Love - No Shows Topical
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1155
Re: Soldier 'an Sailor's Love - No Shows Topical
i liked the piece it, you paint a picture in every piece i've seen, good work.
- Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:59 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Castle of Mystery
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1557
Re: Castle of Mystery
it's great, i personally loved the "Silent, the sky is an easle, the paint pot had been opened,
Dashes of violet, appear as drops in the ocean," line, but canvas and blackness don't really rhyme that threw me for a second.
Dashes of violet, appear as drops in the ocean," line, but canvas and blackness don't really rhyme that threw me for a second.
- Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:54 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Awaiting The Bus
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1707
Re: Awaiting The Bus
i enjoy the vocabulary and the picture you painted, a couple lines flowed a little clunky, but overall i like it. real heart in it.
- Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:45 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: lesson learned
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1734
Re: lesson learned
<t>i was really trying to mix a different set of rhyme schemes with my usual style, more for contrast then anything else. just switching it up because i usually have an almost rapid multi style and wanted to expirememnt with other things. The fission line is merely a tyypo, it's supposed to be "spit...