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by Static
Wed Sep 28, 2011 1:31 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Trials
Replies: 6
Views: 366

Re: Trials

nice piece, the rhyme scheme was damn near perfect. Your vocab was decent but it was more how you used the words that made the piece. I loved the opener "I meditate and let it marinate, personal terror state, Tear my face off preparing dates, daring to stare at fate, No scaring hate, the same way no...
by Static
Tue Sep 27, 2011 6:51 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: to the people
Replies: 4
Views: 311

to the people

I'm gripping the mic, holding my balls hold up pause, hold the applause thanks for teaching me how to crawl how to appall & hold my finger to the law dropping your sharks at the name john paul and most of all, for never letting me fall the charismatic static, i'm steady wreaking havoc trying to get ...
by Static
Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:48 pm
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: CBK V Tre Tru (Tre wins 3-0 KO)
Replies: 7
Views: 645

Re: CBK V Tre Tru

MVGT :Tre, his multies were there, very clear, the flow worked better and i felt he had more vicious hits.
by Static
Sun Sep 18, 2011 1:19 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: whatcha know about it
Replies: 2
Views: 244

whatcha know about it

I be going harder then a fossilized erection steady getting high, waving hi to the Jetsons thoughts off the top while others need rogaine blowing flames hotter then a dragon filled with propane i'm a fucking dro-bot, go go gadget dope game smoking on that kush but i never fucked with cocaine not yet...
by Static
Fri Sep 09, 2011 2:35 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 88SkyLink - multis, punches & wordplays
Replies: 5
Views: 403

Re: 88SkyLink - multis, punches & wordplays

i really dug the multi's and wordplay, keep it up man
by Static
Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:01 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: nightmares of the bottom remake
Replies: 5
Views: 424

Re: nightmares of the bottom remake

upping
by Static
Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:00 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 88SkyLink - Bars for my survivors
Replies: 23
Views: 1542

Re: 88SkyLink - Bars for my survivors

deep shit man, great multi's through the entire peice keep it up man
by Static
Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:11 pm
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: MITTY VS PLAGUE ARSONIST (Mitty wins KO)
Replies: 7
Views: 515

Re: MITTY VS PLAGUE ARSONIST

by no means should you respect moneymaker's fake ass lol, but i would have to give it to mitty, it seemed he had better personal punches. you were throwing kind of broad ones out there, not that some weren't good. I liked the techs message line. but i was feeling mitty' flow, multis and rhymes a lit...
by Static
Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:07 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Mastered the Flow
Replies: 2
Views: 236

Re: Mastered the Flow

pure fire bro, loved it
by Static
Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:38 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Blake Downs -vs- Static (Blake wins KO)
Replies: 7
Views: 533

Re: Blake Downs -vs- Static

check -- Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:32 am -- oh, hi, oh, this pussy thought that he could whoop me you took a gamble you gonna lose better call the bookie Call me big blue cause you nothing but fuckeye talk shit till ya tounge tied, cause i know you ain't a tough guy like luke i'll show up and destroy the d...
by Static
Thu Sep 01, 2011 1:07 pm
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: open invite
Replies: 4
Views: 317

open invite

5 bars/10 lines, anyone at all, you set it up

-- Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:00 am --

really, no one lol?
by Static
Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:03 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Soldier 'an Sailor's Love - No Shows Topical
Replies: 2
Views: 261

Re: Soldier 'an Sailor's Love - No Shows Topical

i liked the piece it, you paint a picture in every piece i've seen, good work.
by Static
Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:59 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Castle of Mystery
Replies: 4
Views: 311

Re: Castle of Mystery

it's great, i personally loved the "Silent, the sky is an easle, the paint pot had been opened,
Dashes of violet, appear as drops in the ocean," line, but canvas and blackness don't really rhyme that threw me for a second.
by Static
Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:54 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Awaiting The Bus
Replies: 4
Views: 388

Re: Awaiting The Bus

i enjoy the vocabulary and the picture you painted, a couple lines flowed a little clunky, but overall i like it. real heart in it.
by Static
Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:45 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: lesson learned
Replies: 4
Views: 337

Re: lesson learned

<t>i was really trying to mix a different set of rhyme schemes with my usual style, more for contrast then anything else. just switching it up because i usually have an almost rapid multi style and wanted to expirememnt with other things. The fission line is merely a tyypo, it's supposed to be "spit...

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