Search found 84 matches
- Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:44 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Just sayin
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3726
Re: Just sayin
This was so suppose ta get better.. Never Whenever I think its gone ta shit.. It just Keeps dropping no matter how gone I git ^^^ nice my High is breached since you want to argue till my defeat In ya eyes it speaks..you switch up when i'm Inside n beat Like i'm that guy ta keep..I should just Try ta...
- Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:05 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: When guessing
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3917
Re: When guessing
I'm about ta grind like a drought is fine think i'm at my best while I reroute my prime my bright thoughts are out and about like shyne while some are good without a voice like a mouthless mime ^^^ wow i loved this! They still do sniff tests cause cats doubt the lines Writing timeless raps,while the...
- Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:11 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Heart of Gold
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2771
Re: Heart of Gold
thank u for ur feedback i loved how u broke it down the way u did and yes i did mean show and soap as soap operas and yes i am a girl lolol
- Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:18 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Multiple Threats (AAS V.2)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2593
Re: Multiple Threats (AAS V.2)
wow very impressive i had read this b4 and loved it i just couldnt leave u feed, see this is how i want to write!!! but i have a long way to go, u r def a great writer loved it!
- Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:14 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Wonder Woman
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2691
Re: Wonder Woman
ty 4 ur feed i will keep that in mind
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:08 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: This Feelin
- Replies: 27
- Views: 25142
Re: This Feelin
wow i loved it!!! the beat, flow lyrics really good and i always ask for written lyrics but there was no need for that with this, great!!!
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:06 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Knowledge...short freestyle
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2025
Re: Knowledge...short freestyle
ha very nice for a keystyle/ freestyle w/e i liked it and so true! nice!
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:58 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Chillin'....
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1942
Re: Chillin'....
The potency of this lifestyle is hard to understand I'm from another land where rap produces beats, and beats produce the heart thats under man ^^^^ i loved this gave me chills lol turn those coals into di-monds, thats when he told me to get my shine on.. ^^^ wow ever since then I been flyer, puttin...
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:46 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Ambition
- Replies: 11
- Views: 5084
Re: Ambition
nice topic loved it, Disappeared.. they're like wheres whats his Name I wonder I'm Thinking a little different now.. Blame the hunger Sedated..chilling.. its Pain I'm Under Could teach you how to get in good shape, Like I'm Training runners ^^^ loved this In deep thought when It rains and thunders M...
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:26 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: 88SkyLink - Success To A Failure
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1851
Re: 88SkyLink - Success To A Failure
"This was the moment when rapping became my saviour When I was so fond of rhyming with a pen and a paper Got me flowing like a water, then vanished like vapour And thats when I came from success, to a failure" ^ nice opening i liked it "And thats when I came from success, to a failure...
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:22 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: topic battle *old*
- Replies: 18
- Views: 7953
Re: topic battle *old*
wow this was very impressive, loved every single line!!! i wont bother quoting bcuz id quote it all this is def something i want to read again lol really great one of the best i've read, in my opinion atually something with a deep meaning behind it and u got ur message across great! just very impres...
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:08 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Fallen....
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2048
Re: The Fallen....
“Guided through the light transaction follow through like peril death to life, life to death the body carries gold like a Pharoah if ever the flip sides on my, I hold their future quite like the tarot swing with might, take flight to the heavens ask God for new apparel” ^^^ loved how u started this!...
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 5:34 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: Check out ma new release
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1622
Re: Check out ma new release
tho the quality is a lil rusty some static but very good for being at home, its good i like ur voice sounds different from other rappers nice flow i just wish u would have added lyrics to read along as i listen good job def got talent!
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 5:27 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3420
Re: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
wow this gave me chills very emotional and unique! "he feels weak and unable, to keep his charade face up got a girlfriend once but they were bound to break up cuz he screams and breaks stuff, as his kids cry to sleep he acts violently, but he too cries inside silent-ly " ^^^ very nice &qu...
- Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:13 pm
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: Quick Verse...Enjoy :)
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6114
Re: Quick Verse...Enjoy :)
loved how u started this it made me curious to know who u were referring 2 and loved how it turns out it was u...... "Now who’s this story’s about?…well, It’s actually me The protagonist…with raps I spit so drastic-a-ly Never been afraid to fly, so I captured a breeze While ya’ll “pussies” don’...