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by vanity
Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:44 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Just sayin
Replies: 8
Views: 1121

Re: Just sayin

This was so suppose ta get better.. Never Whenever I think its gone ta shit.. It just Keeps dropping no matter how gone I git ^^^ nice my High is breached since you want to argue till my defeat In ya eyes it speaks..you switch up when i'm Inside n beat Like i'm that guy ta keep..I should just Try ta...
by vanity
Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:05 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: When guessing
Replies: 9
Views: 1257

Re: When guessing

I'm about ta grind like a drought is fine think i'm at my best while I reroute my prime my bright thoughts are out and about like shyne while some are good without a voice like a mouthless mime ^^^ wow i loved this! They still do sniff tests cause cats doubt the lines Writing timeless raps,while the...
by vanity
Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:11 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Heart of Gold
Replies: 6
Views: 864

Re: Heart of Gold

thank u for ur feedback i loved how u broke it down the way u did and yes i did mean show and soap as soap operas and yes i am a girl lolol :)
by vanity
Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:18 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Multiple Threats (AAS V.2)
Replies: 5
Views: 842

Re: Multiple Threats (AAS V.2)

wow very impressive i had read this b4 and loved it i just couldnt leave u feed, see this is how i want to write!!! but i have a long way to go, u r def a great writer loved it!
by vanity
Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:14 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Wonder Woman
Replies: 6
Views: 840

Re: Wonder Woman

ty 4 ur feed i will keep that in mind :D
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:08 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: This Feelin
Replies: 27
Views: 3782

Re: This Feelin

wow i loved it!!! the beat, flow lyrics really good and i always ask for written lyrics but there was no need for that with this, great!!!
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:06 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Knowledge...short freestyle
Replies: 3
Views: 655

Re: Knowledge...short freestyle

ha very nice for a keystyle/ freestyle w/e i liked it and so true! nice!
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:58 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Chillin'....
Replies: 3
Views: 611

Re: Chillin'....

The potency of this lifestyle is hard to understand I'm from another land where rap produces beats, and beats produce the heart thats under man ^^^^ i loved this gave me chills lol turn those coals into di-monds, thats when he told me to get my shine on.. ^^^ wow ever since then I been flyer, puttin...
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:46 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Ambition
Replies: 11
Views: 1530

Re: Ambition

nice topic loved it, Disappeared.. they're like wheres whats his Name I wonder I'm Thinking a little different now.. Blame the hunger Sedated..chilling.. its Pain I'm Under Could teach you how to get in good shape, Like I'm Training runners ^^^ loved this In deep thought when It rains and thunders M...
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:26 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 88SkyLink - Success To A Failure
Replies: 4
Views: 631

Re: 88SkyLink - Success To A Failure

"This was the moment when rapping became my saviour When I was so fond of rhyming with a pen and a paper Got me flowing like a water, then vanished like vapour And thats when I came from success, to a failure" ^ nice opening i liked it "And thats when I came from success, to a failure It all starts ...
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:22 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: topic battle *old*
Replies: 18
Views: 2762

Re: topic battle *old*

wow this was very impressive, loved every single line!!! i wont bother quoting bcuz id quote it all this is def something i want to read again lol really great one of the best i've read, in my opinion atually something with a deep meaning behind it and u got ur message across great! just very impres...
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:08 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Fallen....
Replies: 3
Views: 604

Re: The Fallen....

“Guided through the light transaction follow through like peril death to life, life to death the body carries gold like a Pharoah if ever the flip sides on my, I hold their future quite like the tarot swing with might, take flight to the heavens ask God for new apparel” ^^^ loved how u started this!...
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 5:34 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Check out ma new release
Replies: 2
Views: 526

Re: Check out ma new release

tho the quality is a lil rusty some static but very good for being at home, its good i like ur voice sounds different from other rappers nice flow i just wish u would have added lyrics to read along as i listen good job def got talent!
by vanity
Wed Jan 04, 2012 5:27 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
Replies: 7
Views: 1036

Re: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)

wow this gave me chills very emotional and unique! "he feels weak and unable, to keep his charade face up got a girlfriend once but they were bound to break up cuz he screams and breaks stuff, as his kids cry to sleep he acts violently, but he too cries inside silent-ly " ^^^ very nice "he feels fam...
by vanity
Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:13 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Quick Verse...Enjoy :)
Replies: 12
Views: 1730

Re: Quick Verse...Enjoy :)

loved how u started this it made me curious to know who u were referring 2 and loved how it turns out it was u...... "Now who’s this story’s about?…well, It’s actually me The protagonist…with raps I spit so drastic-a-ly Never been afraid to fly, so I captured a breeze While ya’ll “pussies” don’t “go...

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