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- Sat May 05, 2012 12:41 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Rich Bastard
- Replies: 0
- Views: 3620
Rich Bastard
I shrug my shoulders as I look across the world At these african children and little foster girls I don't give a fuck and I like to sport uggs So meet me outside over by the golf club Let's have a cup of coffee, here I brought mugs Let's go to the beach, let's show the resort love I'm looking at the...
- Sat Feb 25, 2012 12:43 pm
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Just Wait And See...
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3955
Re: Just Wait And See...
Thank you, I appreciate it bruh.
- Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:37 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Just Wait And See...
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3955
Re: Just Wait And See...
TF was that about? Anyways thanks for the feed.
- Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:59 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Just Wait And See...
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3955
Just Wait And See...
Throughout my porous experience, I have tried to adorn holes A guy that happens to be sublime with a torn soul, born slow Blind with a mind like a longbow, sharp in the sky like a thorn thrown Piercing any guy in my war zone, who pries in my mind's stronghold Mind your own, I'll die trying to hold y...
- Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:54 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Sugar you're sweet .... (DVS1 free)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2487
Re: Sugar you're sweet .... (DVS1 free)
I can relate dude. Honestly, I head to read your work twice because I couldn't interpret it at first, but now that I know I think it's awesome. We can all make a change, but it starts with ourselves and we should all start to become aware of the world around us. It isn't all peaches and cream, I dea...
- Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:41 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: A little thing called love
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2613
Re: A little thing called love
I've never experienced love, but I love how you explained everything you said. It sounded like you were reading the poem in my head lol. Great detail, great poetry. Keep it up!
- Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:32 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Syntax (I Am Made Of Words) (I NEED FEED)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1349
Syntax (I Am Made Of Words) (I NEED FEED)
My formation is formally forsaken An error in my syntax caused me to walk penguin And gorge hatred in you because I was born faithless But that's an aspersion I'm in the world lost waiting It's hard to be a butterfly and sting like a bee When these butterflies in my stomach keep winging in me Strang...
- Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:29 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Ambition
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4893
Re: Ambition
Haz this was an awesome piece, I'll make sure to read your stuff a lot more often man. Good flow, great multi's, and just an all around great written. Keep writing yo.
- Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:24 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Freestyle
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3128
Re: Freestyle
Your a BEAST! Enough said. I enjoyed it, the dashes in between the words were fucking me up while I read it though. Nonetheless you killed it.
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:24 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: God's Reign
- Replies: 0
- Views: 3272
God's Reign
Life is just a roundabout You'll be surprised when you find it out Free your mind, why hide the doubt So many assholes who ain't mature So I treat them like the seafloor Then wait until the anchor falls I can't walk because my ankle's sore I'm so injured from experience That I ain't even made for wa...
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:22 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Vengeance Applied Vol 2... Under The Influence
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1506
Re: Vengeance Applied Vol 2... Under The Influence
Very dope and dark story, chronological and all. The just wish the last part could've been longer but that's all. Good shit.
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:13 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Paper Cuts To A Giant
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3751
Re: Paper Cuts To A Giant
I loved the your multi game man, the message was dope. Keep exposing the fake shit and do your thing. My only problem was that there were a few lines with flows I couldn't catch on to, but other than that it was great! Keep working!
- Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:27 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Part My Passions
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1579
Part My Passions
My inner arduous heart's chewing me apart Argumentative arts spar armed in the marsh Start carving the carcass of my ardor larger Passion partners split apart portioning things That I love is a must but I just can't lust once With a multi-fascination I hate this feeling now He'll be out soon to oust...
- Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:26 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2453
Re: Untitled
Pretty nice and well explained, I liked it a lot your a dope lyricist. Keep that shit up!
- Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:20 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: 12 Bars of Hell (Kuhlerblynd Diss)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2236
Re: 12 Bars of Hell (Kuhlerblynd Diss)
Hell yeah your definitely inspired by Cassidy, regardless of what though that shit was dope bruh I can't wait to read more shit from you. Keep posting!