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by ippiki_17
Sat May 05, 2012 12:41 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Rich Bastard
Replies: 0
Views: 754

Rich Bastard

I shrug my shoulders as I look across the world At these african children and little foster girls I don't give a fuck and I like to sport uggs So meet me outside over by the golf club Let's have a cup of coffee, here I brought mugs Let's go to the beach, let's show the resort love I'm looking at the...
by ippiki_17
Sat Feb 25, 2012 12:43 pm
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Just Wait And See...
Replies: 5
Views: 1136

Re: Just Wait And See...

Thank you, I appreciate it bruh.
by ippiki_17
Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:37 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Just Wait And See...
Replies: 5
Views: 1136

Re: Just Wait And See...

TF was that about? Anyways thanks for the feed.
by ippiki_17
Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:59 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Just Wait And See...
Replies: 5
Views: 1136

Just Wait And See...

Throughout my porous experience, I have tried to adorn holes A guy that happens to be sublime with a torn soul, born slow Blind with a mind like a longbow, sharp in the sky like a thorn thrown Piercing any guy in my war zone, who pries in my mind's stronghold Mind your own, I'll die trying to hold y...
by ippiki_17
Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:54 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Sugar you're sweet .... (DVS1 free)
Replies: 3
Views: 1004

Re: Sugar you're sweet .... (DVS1 free)

I can relate dude. Honestly, I head to read your work twice because I couldn't interpret it at first, but now that I know I think it's awesome. We can all make a change, but it starts with ourselves and we should all start to become aware of the world around us. It isn't all peaches and cream, I dea...
by ippiki_17
Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:41 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: A little thing called love
Replies: 3
Views: 890

Re: A little thing called love

I've never experienced love, but I love how you explained everything you said. It sounded like you were reading the poem in my head lol. Great detail, great poetry. Keep it up!
by ippiki_17
Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:32 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Syntax (I Am Made Of Words) (I NEED FEED)
Replies: 1
Views: 439

Syntax (I Am Made Of Words) (I NEED FEED)

My formation is formally forsaken An error in my syntax caused me to walk penguin And gorge hatred in you because I was born faithless But that's an aspersion I'm in the world lost waiting It's hard to be a butterfly and sting like a bee When these butterflies in my stomach keep winging in me Strang...
by ippiki_17
Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:29 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Ambition
Replies: 11
Views: 1279

Re: Ambition

Haz this was an awesome piece, I'll make sure to read your stuff a lot more often man. Good flow, great multi's, and just an all around great written. Keep writing yo.
by ippiki_17
Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:24 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Freestyle
Replies: 6
Views: 1162

Re: Freestyle

Your a BEAST! Enough said. I enjoyed it, the dashes in between the words were fucking me up while I read it though. Nonetheless you killed it.
by ippiki_17
Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:24 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: God's Reign
Replies: 0
Views: 323

God's Reign

Life is just a roundabout You'll be surprised when you find it out Free your mind, why hide the doubt So many assholes who ain't mature So I treat them like the seafloor Then wait until the anchor falls I can't walk because my ankle's sore I'm so injured from experience That I ain't even made for wa...
by ippiki_17
Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:22 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Vengeance Applied Vol 2... Under The Influence
Replies: 2
Views: 403

Re: Vengeance Applied Vol 2... Under The Influence

Very dope and dark story, chronological and all. The just wish the last part could've been longer but that's all. Good shit.
by ippiki_17
Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:13 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Paper Cuts To A Giant
Replies: 3
Views: 604

Re: Paper Cuts To A Giant

I loved the your multi game man, the message was dope. Keep exposing the fake shit and do your thing. My only problem was that there were a few lines with flows I couldn't catch on to, but other than that it was great! Keep working!
by ippiki_17
Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:27 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Part My Passions
Replies: 3
Views: 468

Part My Passions

My inner arduous heart's chewing me apart Argumentative arts spar armed in the marsh Start carving the carcass of my ardor larger Passion partners split apart portioning things That I love is a must but I just can't lust once With a multi-fascination I hate this feeling now He'll be out soon to oust...
by ippiki_17
Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:26 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Untitled
Replies: 6
Views: 772

Re: Untitled

Pretty nice and well explained, I liked it a lot your a dope lyricist. Keep that shit up!
by ippiki_17
Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:20 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 12 Bars of Hell (Kuhlerblynd Diss)
Replies: 8
Views: 801

Re: 12 Bars of Hell (Kuhlerblynd Diss)

Hell yeah your definitely inspired by Cassidy, regardless of what though that shit was dope bruh I can't wait to read more shit from you. Keep posting!

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