Flow was iLL..
diggin these:
"If its not what it seems,then it probably isn't//
you should double check your vision,and see what you been missing//"

Also like that double dribble line..
Dope concepts and ideas..like the style.
thanks for posting.

<t>Some off the top key shit..kinda edited not too much...<br/> <br/> In the lab chillin, thinking about the future<br/> how it used to be aint free see we gotta move up<br/> and change up the music, cuz its doing too much to prove what?<br/> that change turn to dollars, yea...but that change abuse ...

Damn shit was crazzy..i really believed you n shit..lol
i like the puffy line and the nieces and newphews line..
nice imagery. thanks for posting

Yo this was some grimey shit..lettin them know whats good..
I felt anger in this piece..putting your foot down on them.
thanks for the drop

Good run at it..think you probably could came with some more
and even stronger bars but this is what it is..short and simple.

FLowed perfect. Hope you got some more to write.
Staying alive and creative is a huge sign of strength.
Keep writing. thanks for posting

Words are truely inspiring. Shit is amazing dude.
Diggin the first few bars the most..but the whole thing was really interesting and fun to read. thanks for posting

This was felt on a personal level i can relate.
i see the strong emotion all over.
the flow i think just comes natural, none the less shit was impeccable. Nicely done.

Flow was flawless. Good shit for a key
Shit was relentless.
thanks for posting

Flow was craaazy!! showed nice imagery with your words.
Really diggin this one!
Good shit!

Free spirit mind, body and soul the reasons that I rhyme, prolly keep me under control I stay releasing the old, pressures, but the memories show my face expression is bold, still im faded and thow! but I act humble... I wont throw hands unless you act dumb too then I have to son you... like POP yo...

I like how you started off. it had some up and downs but you pulled it off to finish it off nicely. "what I subdue in the beat could turn slave to a master the weakest man to a factor, switch positions backwards push time into a frenzy, only if this bullshit offends me I'm on my own my path the...

this was a cool start.
I would say write more and
like the others said, structure it
so people can read it better.
Keep writing.
peace

Dope flow for a key. No rust noticed by me..I'd like to see more. I could relate to this situation, i feel what your saying. Thanks for dropping

PeaCE

Yup I dont think they ever gonna legalize smoke..that moneys too good. This was a cool piece. Felt you got the message across pretty clear. Flow was dope too! Kept shit going nice! keep writing.

peace