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by FatalX
Tue May 22, 2012 6:44 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: freestyle (feed if you want
Replies: 2
Views: 466

freestyle (feed if you want

I posted on: sumthin I just started working on-although his title was mispelled crazy and on something blake downs posted a freestyle I think I'm like a fallen angel thats been exiled from heaven// you'll probably never see me smile-I'm defiled and desperate// so it's a childish question....for me t...
by FatalX
Tue May 22, 2012 6:40 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: quick freestyle
Replies: 3
Views: 604

Re: quick freestyle

this is sick---definately the style I like to read and listen to....thoughts flowed well-rhyme scheme solid...I am envious...keep doing you
by FatalX
Tue May 22, 2012 6:38 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: sumthin i started workink on (need feed)
Replies: 3
Views: 627

Re: sumthin i started workink on (need feed)

its a hype peice that lacks imagery...not that anything is out of place it just falls under a different catagory then what most people post here....I personally like it...I think you need to focus on writing more and make sure that when you post you give feed on two other peices
by FatalX
Sat May 19, 2012 5:36 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: an old peice I came across<need feed>
Replies: 1
Views: 433

an old peice I came across<need feed>

FLyAWAY Sever and Kill The only strength one could MUSTER,is from....FEAR & DREAD// While fate shifts it shapes,and eyes peer through SILHOETTEs// NO REGRETS...a faint scent... merely riddles the TERRAIN// As the snow drifts slither,to bury MENS REMAINS// and Howls of Pain-HAUNT,blood curdling DEATH...
by FatalX
Sat May 19, 2012 5:34 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Sever And Kill
Replies: 14
Views: 1396

Re: Sever And Kill

I haven't read anything from you in a while but I gotta tell you from the last peice I read to this one WOW! you have improved all the way around....this was a nice peice monu keep it up
by FatalX
Sat May 19, 2012 5:33 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Fly Away
Replies: 4
Views: 517

Re: Fly Away

I agree with the other two dude...it was nice,not really my type of peace as far as how much energy you placed in it but I am looking forward to reading more\
by FatalX
Thu May 03, 2012 8:00 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: just for YOU-feedback appreciated
Replies: 1
Views: 328

just for YOU-feedback appreciated

I wanna watch the world burn-->then play in its ashes// I want to fuck with your head while I'm playing with matches// I want to make you think shit-->that you hate to imagine// then turn around and let you know that I've been saying this backwards// It begins.......the clock--has just started ticki...
by FatalX
Thu May 03, 2012 7:59 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: ...Why Write?...
Replies: 2
Views: 417

Re: ...Why Write?...

I can respect this peice...multies for the most part held where cement although you it seems to me you had a little struggle with the change ups although that may just be me and not the way youd spit it....a pretty even flow but you started off stronger then you finished and it waned to the end....o...
by FatalX
Thu May 03, 2012 7:55 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Craziest Ride
Replies: 7
Views: 770

Re: Craziest Ride

a level of writing I truly appreciate and accept-wish I could hear this peace....truly in synch with the dialect of true hip hop.........I was awwed by this-very nice
by FatalX
Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:26 am
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: 2 word cypher
Replies: 186
Views: 8930

Re: 2 word cypher

protrudent cum
by FatalX
Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:26 am
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: 3 word cypher
Replies: 409
Views: 14281

Re: 3 word cypher

cementing jill's tires
by FatalX
Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:03 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: my ressurection
Replies: 1
Views: 221

my ressurection

When I crawled out of hell with my head on my shoulders// it was hard to comprehend that I was just a lil bit older// my heart was cold......you see-what I faced was eternity// exiled from this earth only to embrace what was under me// ...they called it sin,I called it the life I lived// and if I re...
by FatalX
Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:01 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Demonic Enigma
Replies: 7
Views: 553

Re: Demonic Enigma

it took me a minute to adjust to reading this style but once I got the gist of it....I really like it....nice vocab and although the rhyming didnt synch up on point for me reading it I could def picture someone spitting it where they altered there voice for it....very cool -- Mon Dec 19, 2011 3:02 p...
by FatalX
Tue Dec 20, 2011 6:56 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Hardly Working
Replies: 5
Views: 412

Re: Hardly Working

Im definatly gon have to agree with Quix on this one...that was the cleanest....your follow through was aight and you had a couple decent lines that held my attention it was enjoyable....pretty solid
by FatalX
Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:29 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: OLD monumental and fatalx collab
Replies: 0
Views: 221

OLD monumental and fatalx collab

this is something me and MONUMENTAL wrote like a year ago I found in my messages and I dont remember if anyone had a chance to read it....this is really a rough draft before we went back and edit'd anything but both of us came pretty solid for a collabo.....I dont think monumental would be upset abo...

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