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- Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:41 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: *uc* You
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2253
Re: *uc* You
Not bad, raw emotion was there try to increase line length with more content, try using basic imagery to pull the reader in, also spell check drops I'm not a good with grammar infact I'm dyslexic but spelling mistakes fuck up the flow and throw readers off, just a heads up Peace [ Post made via iPod...
- Wed Jul 27, 2011 8:53 am
- Forum: Illest Topical Tournament 2011
- Topic: 3rd String QB vs Deception (1st Round)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2223
Re: 3rd String QB vs Deception (1st Round)
Check
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- Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:25 am
- Forum: Illest Topical Tournament 2011
- Topic: Topical Battle Royale Preliminary
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5012
Re: Topical Battle Royale Preliminary
ima give my vote to QB, i dont have time to explain realy but im sure the above have explained enough, i enjoyed his verse the best. Potassium solutions as answers to my criminal selections in question after a last meal and undressing im tied down as they reveal the final lesson I found a form of pr...
- Fri Jul 22, 2011 9:30 am
- Forum: Illest Topical Tournament 2011
- Topic: Topical Battle Royale Preliminary
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5012
Re: Topical Battle Royale Preliminary
Through wicked times came my pain, one to scorch souls A burn uncompromised by the rain drops spitting in horse blows If I knew then what I know now, id be better in disguise Wouldn't let them take me to genocide for like Anne I'd hide Never too be found, off the radar, special forces wouldn't find ...
- Thu Jul 21, 2011 1:47 am
- Forum: Illest Topical Tournament 2011
- Topic: Topical Text Tournament (SIGN UPS)
- Replies: 23
- Views: 7320
Re: Topical Text Tournament (SIGN UPS)
in, how i link this to aim so my pms will get emails sent to my fone?
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:10 am
- Forum: Callout Section
- Topic: Open call
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1486
Open call
Well I'm trying to elevate so ten lines due tuesday as I have work tomorrow
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- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:53 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Free Flowing Poetry 2
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5475
Re: Free Flowing Poetry 2
If those legs are in fact painted on
Where did you find paint that doesn’t run?
that was dope.... no realy it was, so was the whole peice but i felt this part more creative. but props keep doing your thing.
Where did you find paint that doesn’t run?
that was dope.... no realy it was, so was the whole peice but i felt this part more creative. but props keep doing your thing.
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:50 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: alphabetical cypher
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8646
Re: alphabetical cypher
Alphabetical Assonance's Amazing
Aranging A's As Aim After Awaking
is that what you mean
Aranging A's As Aim After Awaking
is that what you mean
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:46 am
- Forum: The Lounge
- Topic: SENDING PM's OF YOUR BATTLE VERSE?!?!?
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4453
Re: SENDING PM's OF YOUR BATTLE VERSE?!?!?
i thinks it a good idea tbh, if people are going to elevate then surely they will take more time to write, try and think things out, then post. after the battle if they want to know what there doing wrong they could ask someone what they need to focus on. instead of someone going change this that an...
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:36 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Birth Of K Panda
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3229
Re: Birth Of K Panda
The smell is irritant, sounds of eeriness in increments, I'm alone, completely lost The feeling of death is imminent, keeping me vigilant, an immigrant but at what cost? i think the assonance in this bar was too strong, the rhyming of slightly forced words made it drag along as most of these word ar...
- Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:39 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: bench lol
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1238
Re: bench lol
thanks for the feed def
- Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:24 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Talkin God......Angry
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2155
Re: Talkin God......Angry
nice deep drop man, the second religous peice since ive been back lol, but nice work look forward to seing your next piece and see if you can switch it up a little
- Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:21 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: A Hole In The Confessional Booth (REVISED, READ ME!!!)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2002
Re: A Hole In The Confessional Booth
Or somewhere else... I can easily prove their system fails Point to the "stars in the dark night" & watch every 'Christian Bail' The Reverend runs, no Adidas.. conversations starting up Got me asking "did Tsunami victims not pray hard enough?" nice few lines Do ya lie? Raise ...
- Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:00 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: bench lol
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1238
bench lol
incase of confusion this was written for the NWL, the topic was a pretty bland picture of a bench ill try insert picture if i can. http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i233/Ryan_B_2k6/hx9qtc.jpg I’ve walked this lane before, a place where trees are bare and wind is low a scarce land, inhabited by these...
- Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:19 am
- Forum: Illest Suggestions
- Topic: Illestlyrics iphone app??
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6388
Re: Illestlyrics iphone app??
problem is you need apple developing suite(or wateva its called)then you need to programe the app probs with xml in c++ or with a unique apple writing code.
i think the suite cost money aswell, to do it for driod i dont no how to do but windows 7 phone has some software to programe apps in c+
i think the suite cost money aswell, to do it for driod i dont no how to do but windows 7 phone has some software to programe apps in c+