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- Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:32 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2453
Re: Untitled
the fuck man? soulo : First I feel annoyed and bothered, I awoke from slumber to a world devoid of colors where people destroy each other and make it their choice to suffer ruckus: "I'm annoyed with all these days that are devoid of color/ People destroy each other like its our choice to suffe...
Re: Phobias
What's wrong with your voice?
- Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:10 am
- Forum: Crews
- Topic: ArchiText Penmanship
- Replies: 22
- Views: 12091
Re: ArchiText Penmanship
Checking in.
- Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:27 pm
- Forum: Producer's Lounge
- Topic: (New Beat) I'm Right Here
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1275
Re: (New Beat) I'm Right Here
That singing voice is a little too loud right now.
- Sat Oct 29, 2011 7:39 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2453
Untitled
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eyC5rlIuK4g[/video] First I feel annoyed and bothered, I awoke from slumber to a world devoid of colors where people destroy each other and make it their choice to suffer I stopped the noise to raise the voice of wonder shouting "remember me" but no o...
- Mon Oct 24, 2011 4:50 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Beast from the East
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2103
Re: Beast from the East
Canibus lover, eh? You're living in an illusion*
I like your attempts at wordplays and stuff, but you could really polish that verse structure to make it flow and hit it off well.
I like your attempts at wordplays and stuff, but you could really polish that verse structure to make it flow and hit it off well.
- Mon Oct 24, 2011 4:48 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Killa Heist.. *A Super Collab*... DO NOT SLEEP
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1387
Re: The Killa Heist.. *A Super Collab*... DO NOT SLEEP
^I say fuck that bullshit. If you wrote a long, nice ass piece, post it as one so people can get the entirety of your work.
- Mon Oct 24, 2011 5:41 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Aint Nobody Fucking With Me
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1421
- Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:07 pm
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: My Entire World
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3593
Re: My Entire World
Take my feedback with intention to improve. I think you're forcing rhymes that dictate how you write your verses. "past~mistakes that could fascinate minds at a rapid~rate Somehow in the back,~my~brain is where lessons are fast~to~fade as if my passion’s~changed Faster than a new fashion~came, ...
- Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:34 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Prometheus
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1409
Prometheus
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQPnXZdkzU4[/video] I'm searching for hope, desperate and learning to cope I'm mentally broke confined so it's hard for personal growth I gave 'fire' to man as part of my retirement plan and now these murderous folks love defiling the land in the style of a man...
- Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:28 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Short Imagery
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1840
Re: short imagery
Thanks man. Just moved into my college so I haven't had time to check this site.
- Thu Sep 15, 2011 7:16 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Short Imagery
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1840
Short Imagery
He awoke in darkness; cold sweat drenched his face paranoia closed in; fear clutched his mental state nothing but pitch black; hopeful words were extinguished except the white lies that reassured his existence he stared blankly letting his iris adapt to the night perspectives shifted; the walls wer...
- Fri Sep 02, 2011 5:27 pm
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: Freestyle Cypher
- Replies: 87
- Views: 78792
- Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:53 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Try
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1719
Re: Try
dope.
- Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:52 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Dark Side | The Destruction of Man & Earth |
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1920
Re: Dark Side | The Destruction of Man & Earth |
Kulture: I overwrite about the bright light at the end of peoples tunnels not in excite, I keep up the good work and hoping its worth as I fight for my life on this earth, people fighting for there turf is it really worth the delight? for their life on earth?, Instead of going for attack I make a t...