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by Soulo
Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:32 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Untitled
Replies: 6
Views: 525

Re: Untitled

the fuck man? soulo : First I feel annoyed and bothered, I awoke from slumber to a world devoid of colors where people destroy each other and make it their choice to suffer ruckus: "I'm annoyed with all these days that are devoid of color/ People destroy each other like its our choice to suffer/" h...
by Soulo
Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:26 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Phobias
Replies: 17
Views: 908

Re: Phobias

What's wrong with your voice?
by Soulo
Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:10 am
Forum: Crews
Topic: ArchiText Penmanship
Replies: 22
Views: 2083

Re: ArchiText Penmanship

Checking in.
by Soulo
Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:27 pm
Forum: Producer's Lounge
Topic: (New Beat) I'm Right Here
Replies: 1
Views: 463

Re: (New Beat) I'm Right Here

That singing voice is a little too loud right now.
by Soulo
Sat Oct 29, 2011 7:39 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Untitled
Replies: 6
Views: 525

Untitled

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eyC5rlIuK4g[/video] First I feel annoyed and bothered, I awoke from slumber to a world devoid of colors where people destroy each other and make it their choice to suffer I stopped the noise to raise the voice of wonder shouting "remember me" but no one ever me...
by Soulo
Mon Oct 24, 2011 4:50 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Beast from the East
Replies: 4
Views: 373

Re: Beast from the East

Canibus lover, eh? You're living in an illusion*

I like your attempts at wordplays and stuff, but you could really polish that verse structure to make it flow and hit it off well.
by Soulo
Mon Oct 24, 2011 4:48 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Killa Heist.. *A Super Collab*... DO NOT SLEEP
Replies: 4
Views: 418

Re: The Killa Heist.. *A Super Collab*... DO NOT SLEEP

^I say fuck that bullshit. If you wrote a long, nice ass piece, post it as one so people can get the entirety of your work.
by Soulo
Mon Oct 24, 2011 5:41 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Aint Nobody Fucking With Me
Replies: 3
Views: 297

Re: Aint Nobody Fucking With Me

whack.
by Soulo
Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:07 pm
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: My Entire World
Replies: 7
Views: 902

Re: My Entire World

Take my feedback with intention to improve. I think you're forcing rhymes that dictate how you write your verses. "past~mistakes that could fascinate minds at a rapid~rate Somehow in the back,~my~brain is where lessons are fast~to~fade as if my passion’s~changed Faster than a new fashion~came, seaso...
by Soulo
Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:34 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Prometheus
Replies: 2
Views: 256

Prometheus

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQPnXZdkzU4[/video] I'm searching for hope, desperate and learning to cope I'm mentally broke confined so it's hard for personal growth I gave 'fire' to man as part of my retirement plan and now these murderous folks love defiling the land in the style of a man...
by Soulo
Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:28 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Short Imagery
Replies: 5
Views: 498

Re: short imagery

Thanks man. Just moved into my college so I haven't had time to check this site.
by Soulo
Thu Sep 15, 2011 7:16 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Short Imagery
Replies: 5
Views: 498

Short Imagery

He awoke in darkness; cold sweat drenched his face paranoia closed in; fear clutched his mental state nothing but pitch black; hopeful words were extinguished except the white lies that reassured his existence he stared blankly letting his iris adapt to the night perspectives shifted; the walls wer...
by Soulo
Fri Sep 02, 2011 5:27 pm
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: Freestyle Cypher
Replies: 87
Views: 8318

Re: Freestyle Cypher

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by Soulo
Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:53 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Try
Replies: 4
Views: 400

Re: Try

dope.
by Soulo
Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:52 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Dark Side | The Destruction of Man & Earth |
Replies: 4
Views: 370

Re: Dark Side | The Destruction of Man & Earth |

Kulture: I overwrite about the bright light at the end of peoples tunnels not in excite, I keep up the good work and hoping its worth as I fight for my life on this earth, people fighting for there turf is it really worth the delight? for their life on earth?, Instead of going for attack I make a t...

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