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by Colossus
Mon Jul 11, 2011 11:26 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Coleon - Messagin' a Bottle *Will Return Feed*
Replies: 4
Views: 666

Re: Coleon - Messagin' a Bottle *Will Return Feed*

I just feel like I improve quicker if I go a little at a time. Some people start out and release whole tapes with the same thing wrong on it. I love writing and I write a lot but unless it's a story, it's rarely an entire song. I try to save hard verses for collabs and my best material for when I've...
by Colossus
Thu Jul 07, 2011 6:08 pm
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: Multi Cypher
Replies: 5
Views: 1294

Multi Cypher

Either go as long as you can on one multi or make a story out of it.

Examples:
Story
or
As Long As You Can

Multi to start with - Indian giver
by Colossus
Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:54 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Daniel Aliff - Twice The Legal Limit (feat. Seven)
Replies: 4
Views: 633

Re: Daniel Aliff - Twice The Legal Limit (feat. Seven)

Trippy beat. Vocals sound like they could use a bit of a boost, still understandable. The content is dark so I feel like you should have tried to make your energy voice fit it. The lyrics are great, I like the track. Good flow, very few slip ups. Keep it up.
by Colossus
Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:48 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Bad Water (Produced by: Genesis7)
Replies: 4
Views: 740

Re: Bad Water (Produced by: Genesis7)

Nice beat. A below the ocean type feel to it. You have a cool Method Man type thing to your voice. Perfectly suits the beat. Good mixing. Awesome flow.Great singer except when she does the little girl voice thing. This is some professional level stuff. I like everything about this. D/L'in for phone ...
by Colossus
Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:10 pm
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: Audio Battle
Replies: 4
Views: 722

Re: Audio Battle

Me either. #ErrbodyMadScaredAndShit
by Colossus
Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:41 pm
Forum: Mixtape Corner
Topic: 2xS Presents: "The Defining Moment"
Replies: 13
Views: 2151

Re: 2xS Presents: "The Defining Moment"

I deleted/moved around 300GB of stuff off this computer this week and only ended up giving this a brief listen. From what I recall your flow and technical skills were great and the songs were put together well. The only flaw that really stood out to me was that a lot of it sounded like run of the mi...
by Colossus
Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:36 pm
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: Audio Battle
Replies: 4
Views: 722

Audio Battle

Please show up to your execution.
2 1/2 minutes max and voting is best of 5.
by Colossus
Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:20 pm
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Whats your writing process?
Replies: 18
Views: 1981

Re: Whats your writing process?

Topic - Beat - 1st Verse - Chorus - Other Verses - Title

In that order.

When writing the verses I tend to not write lines based around what words are going to rhyme. I usually have a loose concept for a line then find rhymes that let me use that concept.
by Colossus
Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:18 pm
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: 1 bar = 1 line
Replies: 5
Views: 752

Re: 1 bar = 1 line

1 bar = 2 lines in writing. Even lyrics to audio tracks.

1 bar = 1 line only in the auditory facet.
Such as is exemplified by the classic 16 bar verse which equals 16 lines.
by Colossus
Tue Jun 07, 2011 8:40 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: Topical.... 3rd party picks topic.... due 24hrs-48hrs
Replies: 6
Views: 736

Re: Topical.... 3rd party picks topic.... due 24hrs-48hrs

An atheist dies and goes to heaven destroying his life long belief that there is no God.
by Colossus
Tue Jun 07, 2011 8:32 am
Forum: Mixtape Corner
Topic: 2xS Presents: "The Defining Moment"
Replies: 13
Views: 2151

Re: 2xS Presents: "The Defining Moment"

D/L'in now. I'll make sure to give it a listen this week.
by Colossus
Tue Feb 08, 2011 6:30 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: 2011 Til Infinity
Replies: 7
Views: 1045

Re: 2011 Til Infinity

<t>Wax swagger jacker smh.<br/> (Like I didn't want to do the same thing lol)<br/> <br/> I like how fast you went with the beat. Good decision. Good breath control. The delivery was pretty stale, your main problem. The lyrics were good, nothing eye opening but just good. I think you should have used...
by Colossus
Sun Jan 23, 2011 6:30 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: The Most Arrogant MoFucka Here
Replies: 10
Views: 876

Re: The Most Arrogant MoFucka Here

I like the ol schoo feel I get from this track...Its kinda short but the lyrics standout, your delivery has good energy, doesn't seem forced real smooth...The mixing isn't bad, overall quality piece just wish it was longer...if you get a chance check out my mixtape at http://www.illestlyrics.com/bo...

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