Yeah I'm Here

Random shit i made i made last month, i posting it now..

WHERE I EDIT MY VERSE?????????, when i dropped like an hour before you ever dropped...

5 bars

due: ???? a week for you, i'll drop tonight

1.5/5 A point and a half for flow and rhyming. Lil Wayne and everyone else has done that wordplay about marathons. No personals. No real punches. Weak bar. It was a personal diss actually, if you would've read under my verse you would understand. No swaying here tho fam, the count is 4-0 KO. nahh i...

Aight here's my piece. I really like how both came at each other thru this, and I was diggin most of the lines that were said. The flow would have to go to Creative, while the multi's would go to TSD, if that gives you an idea of how close this is. Here's the thing tho, it seemed to me like TSD was...

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Umm, don't know how to score someone who is a bar short, so with that being said. Flow: Tie Multis: Dude Punches: Tie Personals: Killah Creativity: Tie Nameplay: Dude Overall, Dude's first two bars didn't work really, he had some nice nameplay with the KKK stuff, but that was it, plus dropping firs...

4 bars..looks like alot cause of long sentences U Goin Sniff The Lost Like sum Death Dust Snorted by Coke Addicts, U Got 15 wins, but "Hoe, Thats It" cuss Like a Canceled Teenage Bday, Ur lil Sweet "16" Wont Happin! This Under Cover Cop can get his Face Sprayed, For Tryna "...

Vote Haz

Haz Came Lil Bit More Creative,haz Punches and Metas is what Killed Irap, irap had better flow thou..that taco bell line was the harder line in yo verse

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EDIT Just postin the link that i voted in a battle

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/irap- ... ml#p151306

sure set it up

damn why is my text sctructure mest up i remember i had it in the middle?

Wow haha, ... *Bites Donut*

upping for votes

HEyyy Congrats Leeroy Good Luck On Yo battle with Tru