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- Wed Jun 22, 2011 4:29 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Freestyle spoken word
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2990
Re: Freestyle spoken word
Thanks for the elaboration!
- Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:17 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: More
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1965
Re: More
I liked this, a lot. I like the way it's written, clever. Loved the alliteration paying respect.
- Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:13 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Freestyle spoken word
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2990
Re: Freestyle spoken word
I dunno, I'm kind of unsure on this one. I reread several times to try to unearth what it meant to me or possibly, what you were trying to say. All I can say is that I did pick up that there are some ironies here.
- Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:04 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Spontaneous Writing
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1355
Re: Spontaneous Writing
Well, if this had another title I might have been compelled to call it uneven and disjointed ramblings but, your title encompasses what this truly is; a glimpse into the mind of a young man in his early stages of adulthood.
Re: Absolute
Sup Ab!
- Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:40 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: 11/18/09
- Replies: 2
- Views: 931
Re: 11/18/09
I see you setting the concept up and everything but the execution is where this one lacked, IMO. Bars 3 & 4 seem outta place, contrived. And then the next 4 bars after that seem like they were just devoted to spittin with no apparant connection to the opener. And then you kinda just ended on an ...
- Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:25 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: I Don't Know
- Replies: 2
- Views: 870
Re: I Don't Know
This was a pretty decent drop. I think you def captured the mood of a confused soul. It flowed nicely from the start but the rhyme seemed to just hit a wall here: I feel pressured into changin' who my soul once was I'm pushing my limits plus I ain't seen a good relationship in a minute From there it...
- Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:02 am
- Forum: New Users
- Topic: Endtroducing...Illcat
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1117
Endtroducing...Illcat
What up IL! I used to be on a site called Abyss awhile ago, it died. This is one of the few sites I've come across in the time since that really impressed me in quality and creativity. The forums def remind me of Abyss. I already read a few posts and the moniker fits. I'll prolly be most active in t...