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by Illcat
Wed Jun 22, 2011 4:29 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Freestyle spoken word
Replies: 5
Views: 1198

Re: Freestyle spoken word

Thanks for the elaboration!
by Illcat
Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:17 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: More
Replies: 3
Views: 894

Re: More

I liked this, a lot. I like the way it's written, clever. Loved the alliteration paying respect.
by Illcat
Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:13 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Freestyle spoken word
Replies: 5
Views: 1198

Re: Freestyle spoken word

I dunno, I'm kind of unsure on this one. I reread several times to try to unearth what it meant to me or possibly, what you were trying to say. All I can say is that I did pick up that there are some ironies here.
by Illcat
Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:04 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Spontaneous Writing
Replies: 2
Views: 646

Re: Spontaneous Writing

Well, if this had another title I might have been compelled to call it uneven and disjointed ramblings but, your title encompasses what this truly is; a glimpse into the mind of a young man in his early stages of adulthood.
by Illcat
Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:55 am
Forum: New Users
Topic: Absolute
Replies: 3
Views: 399

Re: Absolute

Sup Ab!
by Illcat
Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:40 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 11/18/09
Replies: 2
Views: 345

Re: 11/18/09

I see you setting the concept up and everything but the execution is where this one lacked, IMO. Bars 3 & 4 seem outta place, contrived. And then the next 4 bars after that seem like they were just devoted to spittin with no apparant connection to the opener. And then you kinda just ended on an "ehh...
by Illcat
Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:25 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: I Don't Know
Replies: 2
Views: 363

Re: I Don't Know

This was a pretty decent drop. I think you def captured the mood of a confused soul. It flowed nicely from the start but the rhyme seemed to just hit a wall here: I feel pressured into changin' who my soul once was I'm pushing my limits plus I ain't seen a good relationship in a minute From there it...
by Illcat
Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:02 am
Forum: New Users
Topic: Endtroducing...Illcat
Replies: 5
Views: 457

Endtroducing...Illcat

What up IL! I used to be on a site called Abyss awhile ago, it died. This is one of the few sites I've come across in the time since that really impressed me in quality and creativity. The forums def remind me of Abyss. I already read a few posts and the moniker fits. I'll prolly be most active in t...

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